I hope I can learn from this and not make this mistake again in my next book.
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Summary statistics of the inheritance illusion - this section mainly talks about some character details in the illusion.
Illusionary Maki - actually just randomly picked someone.
Logically speaking, after Lin Yu took Su's place, the two mentors corresponded to Ji Zi [although she didn't teach anything but she was more suitable than Maki], and the other must be Ghost.
However, the character of Himiko happened to exist in the previous civilization, so it would be difficult to replace Himiko.
So I asked Machilaoden to come and make up the numbers.
There is no need to say much about Rita. In the original book, when Bianca fell asleep, she was standing in Kevin's position.
There is no other reason why Bianca replaced Mei here, it is purely for the effect of the show. Facts have proved that everyone's feedback makes me feel that the effect of the show is indeed in place.
Nagamitsu who replaced Mobius, Ryusuke Muryūta who replaced Velvet - they were just a few smart people to make up the numbers.
Let me also tell you about a plot that I wanted to write in this book but forgot to write. According to my own idea at the time, the replacement character for Danzhu Cangxuan was... the Alin sisters.
As I was writing, when I remembered that I had this idea, I realized that I had completely forgotten about it during that period of time when I was busy updating the pages.
This is truly the most embarrassing episode.
The same situation also occurs in the plot.
Some people have asked why the Moonlight Throne, a super bug product that only appears in the later stage, appears in the Constraint chapter. Because Lin Yu has been in the environment for a few years and has a more thorough understanding of the Slide Lantern Barrier, his proficiency in the Slide Lantern Barrier has improved a lot in this chapter.
Then, before the Constraint Lawmaker appeared, Lin Yu found relevant scientific researchers to ask if there was any way to make the thing he released. In the end, he found that the group of geniuses around him were so amazing that they could do it.
So the first version of the Moonlight Throne in the illusion was actually a slide barrier amplifier.
As a result, due to the rush of updates during that period, I wrote so smoothly later that I forgot to add this detail.
Alas, maybe I really need to take a good rest after finishing this book.
There's nothing else to say, let's move on to the next one.
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Alicia——One of the characters that was not intended to be a harem.
Many colleagues on this site have written that Alicia likes the protagonist, and it’s normal that everyone likes to read them write this way.
But in my opinion, you said that she fell in love with the protagonist alone...
No, I can't imagine such a scene.
It's not that I have to write about it, but when I got to that point in the book, I realized that there was actually no problem in not writing about Alicia as the heroine. I was just pursuing a clear idea.
In addition, those who have read the final remarks of the previous book know that I have always had a headache with the character of Alicia.
As everyone knows, I'm a third-rate fan fiction writer who likes to ride on the popularity of others. Since this character is so popular, I definitely planned to take advantage of it.
It turned out that if she were the main character, many plots could not be developed with my writing style.
In the end, I had to choose between taking advantage of the popularity but increasing the probability of my book jumping out of the book, or not taking advantage of the popularity and being timid. I chose the latter.
As a result, when I was writing this book, I found that it would be better not to write about her.
If you can't figure it out, just don't write it.
As a result, Alicia can only be regarded as a second-tier supporting character in this book, and she does not have many scenes.
Lin Yi got to know her because as a human being, Lin Yi also had the flawless bond, so when she saw a child of an acquaintance, she took the opportunity to take care of the child.
There’s nothing much to say about the other feelings, let’s move on to the next one.
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Bartender - Iron Dragon Set.
I feel like there's nothing much to say.
I'd just like to take this opportunity to use some free words to introduce what the bartender did after the ending.
You have to know that even if the bartender's wine is S-grade, you will want to curse after drinking it.
In the ten years between the end of the war and when Lin Yu ran to the railway, the bartender would finish his work normally during his normal work [yes, he had a formal position in Tianming, and the bar was purely a side job], and then when he was a bartender, he would work hard to research the strongest and most fierce wine.
The strongest wine is the normal good wine that Lin Yu drank in the later chapter, and the most powerful wine is the wine that the bartender continues to add ingredients to on the premise of "being able to defeat the king of the world".
The first time Lin Yu drank, he wanted to curse for three months.
However, considering that the bartender spent his own salary on researching the two most powerful and fiercest liquors, no one said anything more.
Personal preference, just avoid it.
As for the result, we can only say that everyone has talent. Anyway, Lin Yu will admit that this wine is indeed terrible after drinking it.
By the time Lin Yu went to the railway chapter, Lin Yu had asked the bartender to give him the recipes of the two kinds of wine.
In the latest chapter of the Railway Chapter, Chapter 5, Lin Yuhe drank Ji Zi's coffee without changing his expression not because he was strong enough, but simply because this thing was a little bit inferior to the bartender's most powerful wine.
Well, next one.
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Xiao Qiao - There's actually not much to write about this character.
He was pulled out when Cocolia died, simply because there was no one else under Cocolia who was useful to him.
Later, I thought about writing a few words about the plot of him and the Anti-Entropy Team, but everyone was speeding up later, even Einstein and Tesla were as busy as gyroscopes, so in the end I thought about it and decided not to write it, it would be a waste of time and no one would want to read it.
Well, next one.
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Lin Yi - a character I never thought of writing at first.
It was purely an accident that it was born.
The opportunity for the birth of this character can be traced back to a plot in the Anti-Entropy Invasion.
In the Anti-Entropy Invasion storyline at that time, I spent a long time choosing the person to practice with Kiana.
I decided to choose Mei, but she doesn’t seem that suitable.
Although Mei in this book did not have the treatment of a heart bomb, she was still in a state where she could not release her power at will.
So if Kiana wanted to become stronger, there were several best sparring partners to choose from at that time.
One is Fu Hua, but I banned her at the beginning.
After all, the Anti-Entropy Invasion chapter required fighting on different fronts, so in order to give the entire audience a slight sense of crisis, Fu Hua had to go it alone.
It was definitely impossible to choose pressed duck, so in the end when Lin Yu went to the banquet, Mei Yuno had to choose one of the two.
Then I thought about it, because it is a split storyline, and the plot requires the protagonist to save one side, then one side must be underpowered.
Although Mei is in a state where she cannot release her power at will, that does not mean she cannot release it.
She went to spar with Kiana, then Walter's clone jumped out, Mei Kiana was in danger, and Lei Lu woke up...
In the original novel, Lei Lu lost because she was too reckless and the heart bomb had a five-minute limit. If there was no bomb limit, she would not have lost.
That would cause a sense of crisis when the lines are divided and the protagonist would have to save the situation, so Mei would have to be banned, and in the end only Kiana and Yuno would be left.
Continuing on, the problem of insufficient combat power of the World Snake had already been taken into consideration, so according to my idea, the World Snake should start working hard to replenish its combat power.
In the plot, the World Snake's biotechnology and clone technology trees are not low. Then I thought, if I were the Gray Snake, seeing a person suddenly rise so rapidly from an ordinary person like taking a plane, I would definitely be interested in his DNA, so I let the Gray Snake collect the genes.
At this point, the only 'blood of the strong' that Gray Snake could collect was the blood of Lin Yu, Yuno, who was sparring with Kiana at the time and helped to hold back the enemy, and Kiana.
Thinking of this, I added the plot where Lin Yu was deliberately injured by Walter's clone, otherwise it would be so embarrassing if he didn't lose blood.
Of course, I know that the protagonist's clone is most likely a poison, so this is definitely not the direction I'm heading at the beginning.
After all the factors came together, the character of Lin Yi finally took shape.
During that period, there were some indirect hints that hinted at the existence of such a character.
So some readers at that time were very much looking forward to her appearance.
This was indeed proven by the surge in readership when she officially debuted.
From the perspective of role positioning, it can be regarded as a tranquilizer that gives Lin Yu a more peaceful state of mind.
But as I was writing, it went astray, and in the end it turned from a stabilizer into a catalyst, which was somewhat of a mistake.
And looking back, after Lin Yu regained his memory, he was so eager for family affection that he would only want to protect his daughter. Then, because of the two reasons of [revenge for his parents] and [protecting his daughter], he became a super curly dog.
All I can say is that this catalyst eventually became a lock in Lin Yu's heart, which was a bit of comfort to me as I was sweating profusely at the time.
By the way, although Lin Yi seems to be very sensible after her debut, she is Kiana's child after all. From the details, some people should be able to notice that she has a bear side in nature.
It's just because she knows that she is only Lin Yu's daughter in terms of blood, and not a normal child born of Lin Yu and other people, so she has been restraining her emotions and trying to be a good child who will not be despised or even abandoned.
I feel like there's nothing more to say, let's move on to the next one.
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Wendy——Actually, I had no intention of focusing on her description, and in fact, there was really no character that I focused on describing.
In my opinion, it is very awkward to write a character like Wendy.
There are some regrets about her, but not many. In other words, not many people want to read her. It's the kind of thing where everyone is happy to read it if it's just for the sake of saving her, but if you focus too much on it, it will make people lose interest in reading it.
And she is different from Yuno in that she is a character with many plots and her personality is relatively fixed.
Many of the plots mentioned here do not refer to Honkai Impact 3 but to Honkai Impact 2. I don't know much about that side, but judging from what others have mentioned, Wendy probably has more plots and a more complete character there.
Then, judging from the timeline, Wendy may have already conducted experiments in 2014. In this case, it would be difficult to write the story of her joining the team in the early stage.
Combined with various off-field factors, there really isn't much that Wendy can write about.
In the later part of the plot, Wendy went to Taixu Mountain and ran away. No one knew where to let her go, so they could only let her go to Fu Hua.
Moreover, if the character setting is continued in the main plot, there will be overlap with Xier. In the end, we can only find an excuse that [she was rescued by Lin Yu not long after being subjected to an experiment, so her personality will be more cheerful].
Moreover, because Wendy was the first opponent that Lin Yu officially fought after he obtained the enhanced equipment [Blank Key + Seven Thunders of Purification], she was very awkwardly treated as a sacrifice party and was easily defeated in the single-player plot, so the plot feeling could not be as good as in the early stage.
I feel helpless, but I have tried my best. On to the next one.
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Li Suchang - the character with the most awkward positioning, even the most awkward character in the protagonist group.
Because she was able to live to the present day only thanks to Otto, and she had always had a good impression of Otto, and she was one of the most "loyal" people to Otto at that stage of the plot.
For this kind of character, either kill her or wake her up.
A character like Li Suchang is more or less popular, and her popularity will be boosted if she is good-looking. So killing her will definitely have more negative impact than positive impact.
So this book chose the second path without hesitation.
In the original story, Li Sushang learned from Bianca and Rita that Otto had caused big problems in the past, and then she straightforwardly said that she would come to help them after helping Otto fight a fight.
I firmly believe that what Xiao Li said was absolutely true, but there is a big problem with this plot.
Only Otto knew about all the beastly things Otto had done, and Bianca and the others knew only a limited amount of things when Otto had not yet announced that he was a traitor who had betrayed his comrades in destiny for 500 years [although I think even those limited things are scary as well].
Then what Xiao Li heard was Bianca's retelling, so she probably had no specific knowledge of what Otto had done in the past.
Not to mention her, even Bianca said at the time that [the casualties caused by the Great Honkai Impact 3 were much greater than what Otto promised], so this led to Xiao Li not realizing the seriousness of the problem of helping Otto.
In this book, the best way to torture her until she rebels is to let her see the harm caused by what Otto did in the past.
So at this point, it was inevitable that she would eat Lin Yu's Phantom Sword God.
After eating the Sword God, Xiao Li was half a member of the team, but in that plot, she still needed an opportunity to join the team.
An opportunity to officially cut ties with Otto.
In my conception at the time, Xiao Li knew that Otto was not a good person, and was then told this fact one after another by Xilin, Wendy, Lin Yu and others. Finally, after seeing the truth clearly in the illusion created by the Magic Lantern Sword God, she should not be as free and easy as in the original work.
It is normal to be targeted by the dominant core when you are in a daze.
At this time, she had the dominant core, and Xiao Li, who was confused at the time, had the opportunity to join the battle against Otto.
As for the fact that her emotional focus shifted to Lin Yu in the end...
Actually, I didn’t really plan to write it at first.
But as I wrote, I felt that she might really do such a thing.
Unlike Otto five hundred years ago, Lin Yu did not have the charm of a mature man, but he showed something attractive enough in other aspects.
