When I started writing the last book, I was basically certain that the collapse of Changkong City would break out around February. Of course, I couldn't find the source at the time, so I could only look for it in the promotional video of Honkai Impact 2.
I forgot whether I found it or not, but I wrote this in the previous book and this one.
Then in the middle of the book, when I was reading the main storyline, I realized that something was wrong.
The Big Three didn't arrive at St. Freya until May . In my opinion, no matter how much you drag your feet after the end of Changkong City, it's impossible for you to wait three months before going to St. Freya.
So at that time I thought I had got the time line wrong.
But in fact, I was not wrong. At most, I was just a little bit early.
In the Blue Sea chapter, it was mentioned that the time when Cocolia created the artificial Honkai was ......
In Kiana's memories in the Sky Meteor Arc, they enrolled in May and participated in their first combat mission in August-September.
From the perspective of the normal timeline, it is impossible for the Jiuyou chapter to take place more than a month after the Escape from Changkong chapter - in the original timeline, this group of people have not yet enrolled in school.
I am not clear about the timeline of the Anti-Entropy Invasion Chapter and the Moon Shadow Chapter [Maji's Defection Chapter], but since everyone is speeding up, this book is definitely faster than the normal plot. All the subsequent timeline acceleration can refer to this one. If it doesn't match, it's all because Lin Yu is a curly dog revenge ghost.
As far as the plot is concerned, Changkong City has undergone a major overhaul from the beginning.
Let’s get back to the topic of plot structure and rhythm.
Judging from the above digressions, the timeline has actually been accelerating madly since the Jiuyou chapter.
But this feeling was not that serious at the time. In my opinion, the timeline really took off with the Anti-Entropy Invasion and the Moon Shadow chapter of the original work and the Awakening of the Law of Death chapter of this book.
Several major events that were reported at the time were put together and resolved in less than two months in terms of the timeline.
Then let's review the original work. It took about half a year from the third collapse to the first time Kiana participated in the mission...
In less than half a year in this book, Lin Yu has killed Otto...
Although it may seem strange for me, as the author, to say this, but now looking back at the plot, I still want to say this...
Why did things become like this.
In the short chapter of Anti-Entropy Invasion, the World Snake failed to rescue people and destroy corpses, which led to the World Snake being suppressed by Destiny in the subsequent plot.
Kiana's feelings for Lin Yu further deepen because of Lin Yu's rescue, which lays the groundwork for some subsequent plots.
The trio's daughter suddenly showed signs of emerging in this chapter.
What remains is the matter of the awakening of the law of death.
The Death Law Awakening chapter corresponds to the Moon Shadow chapter in the original novel. In fact, the plot has some subtle differences from the original novel.
In the original novel, the main plot of the Moon Shadow chapter is Cocolia causing trouble, and the subplot is Otto using Cocolia to cause trouble. In this book, we no longer care about the main plot or the subplot, we just mix them together.
Maki, who was supposed to cooperate with Cocolia, directly reported the people from Cocolia. This is purely my personal opinion.
Regardless of whether people hate or like Maki, I think his brain will be cramped even after he wakes up.
After Cocolia's third collapse, it was obvious that she didn't care about human life.
Maki was worried that Otto would continue to use the Serenity Gem to harm people, so he defected with the gem and went to find Cocolia...
Cooperating with Otto is like trying to get the skin of a tiger. At least you can take advantage of the tiger's power before they turn against you.
Cooperating with Cocolia... She's not an old lady, do you have Alzheimer's disease? There is absolutely no benefit in cooperating with her.
So I asked him to report the people from Cocolia for personal reasons.
Although cooperating with the Gray Snake is not a good choice, even if the World Snake in this book was badly dealt with because Raven sold out the World Snake to save his life, the Gray Snake's reputation could not be as bad as Cocolia's.
After the plot at the beginning is arranged, it is time to start the plot on Tianming's side.
Otto had new ideas after the second collapse, and after the experimental subject K423 successfully gained consciousness, he must have felt that this plan was feasible.
Because of this, some people would say 'Oh, Otto's desire for the Herrscher of Death is already a myth'.
I didn’t find the corresponding plot in the story. If there is a corresponding plot, please provide it to me. I will add 5,000 words to the next book.
I haven't found the corresponding plot of 'Otto no longer needs the Herrscher of Death'. According to my understanding of Otto, your plan to awaken the Law of Void has not even started yet, and Otto must try to see if the real Herrscher of Death can resurrect people.
Xilin was only a core holder and not a true Herrscher of Death. Her performance at that time was such that anyone could see that she was not very capable of using other cores.
Anyway, someone is willing to take the blame for the creation of the Herrscher of Death, so Otto just needs to find an opportunity to snatch the Herrscher of Death away.
Besides, he doesn't have to go to the battlefield. As for the Valkyrie, if she dies, she dies. Since he can get Otto, the Herrscher of Death, he will definitely not feel heartbroken.
In my opinion, these losses are completely acceptable to Otto and he doesn't even think they are big losses. In this case, why doesn't Otto try this method?
So in the Death Rule Awakening chapter, I followed this tone.
By the way, the plot here mentions that Yuno met a spy of World Snake.
Then some people suspected that Mike was also a World Serpent spy.
Based on my impression of World Serpent and Destiny, it is not surprising that World Serpent's spies have infiltrated Destiny.
However, there are not many people who can get into Tianming. After one person enters a department, Gray Snake should arrange other people to go to other departments to collect information.
Therefore, in the personal secondary setting of this book which was not announced until today, there is at most one traitor from World Serpent in a department of Tianming [of course, some departments don’t have even one, it’s really that easy to sneak into Tianming].
From the perspective of plot structure, this plot belongs exclusively to [Herrserker Awakening].
In today's mobile games, this would probably be considered a legendary quest or a companion quest.
Because Yuno performed well in the Nine Netherworlds and Anti-Entropy Invasion, and then in the Death Law Awakening, it was her legendary mission, which led some people to think that Yuno was the first female protagonist...
Well, anyway, although it felt really easy for me to write it, I really didn't have that idea at the time.
There is nothing much to say about the battle. After the fight, Lin Yu scared everyone.
Until he can beat the Herrscher, but the situation was unclear that time so many things were hard to say. But this time everyone knows that Lin Yu defeated the Herrscher of Death in a one-on-one fight with Yuno, which is very scary.
Otto continued to rejoice secretly, but in fact his subsequent actions were simply trying to put more nails in his own coffin.
Siegfried and Anti-Entropy's reactions were okay.
After the World Snake was frightened and took the opportunity to launch a surprise attack on the Oceania branch, the Gray Snake immediately went to Su to beg the traitor to come out. I think this is enough to show how terribly scared the Gray Snake was at that time.
They really tried hard.
To be honest, when I reviewed the plot and saw the story of Gray Snake, I was really moved.
A good employee indeed.
It's a pity that I don't do human things. No matter how well I do my job, I can only be the unlucky guy who gets cheated here.
At the end of this chapter, Chapter 160, because Lin Yu's status was improved, Ghost, as his teacher, said those words to Lin Yu.
As his status improved, Lin Yu had become a superstar in the organization whose mere presence could boost morale.
After all, he defeated two ruthless Herrschers in a row, and defeated them easily the second time, and both times he was able to contain the Honkai within the most controllable range [this is what the outside world thinks].
In addition, the last collapse was the second collapse fourteen years ago. People who are not so familiar with the collapse, the Herrscher, and the truth of fourteen years ago, the view at that time was [tens of millions of people died fourteen years ago, but when Lin Yu took action for the first time, only a few people died in the suburbs and urban areas, and no civilians died the second time. Isn’t this awesome? ].
In this case, although Lin Yu himself does not have that intention, I think he has to shoulder part of the responsibility.
That’s why there are 160 chapters of the story.
Although it was not written very clearly, Lin Yu realized the importance of responsibility at this stage.
Of course, because of some things that happened in the past, Lin Yu would inevitably give up another part of his responsibility while wanting to fulfill his responsibilities. However, this is a story for later, and we will leave it to the chapter on the final transformation.
At the end of these two chapters, the plot is still within the controllable range. As for whether it feels good or not, that depends on everyone's thoughts.
.........
[British Heritage Chapter]——Starts from Chapter 161 and ends with Chapter 183.
This chapter is part of a shorter storyline that I'm planning on having.
After all, I really plan to just go over the fantasy line in a few words.
Moreover, in the initial design of the fantasy line, Lin Yu didn’t have so much fun.
At that time, it was because the performance suddenly improved a little after the Death Law Awakening chapter ended at the end of November, so I thought about it for a moment and started to update the chapter rapidly.
As the story went on, the emotions became more and more intense, so the writing went smoothly and the illusion chapter became an exciting plot.
In this chapter, although Lin Yu has more sense of responsibility than before, he has not yet fully awakened and at least at that time he still feels that it is better to have less trouble than more.
So at first he really didn't want to get involved in this matter.
But after he was forced into the illusion by Su, Lin Yu's thoughts changed.
First of all, you definitely won’t die here. If you’re not going to die, why are you afraid? Just charge, charge, charge.
After the fear of death was suppressed, Lin Yu's nature of actively suppressing it was completely aroused.
Why did he choose to perish together with the End in the end? On the one hand, it is because he will not die, and on the other hand...
——Revenge! Revenge! Revenge!
He himself did not realize it, but this was indeed his course of action at the time.
One more thing to add, I was so excited when writing that I forgot what I had written.
The Moonlight Throne in the illusion was developed before the constraints came out. What was mixed in it was not some of the technologies related to the constraints, but a creation simulated by Lin Yu after analyzing the characteristics of the slide barrier with the help of pre-era technology.
But I had this idea, but I forgot to include this detail when I updated the update, which led to some people saying "Oh, that's not right, can Moonlight Throne really be developed in this time period?"
I took the beating obediently, and it was indeed because I didn’t write down the reason.
As for the storyline about people going to praise Otto when the restraining barrier is broken, I think it's very strange.
To this day, not only has my thoughts not changed, but after analyzing Otto's past mess, I found that anyone can be better at praising him than him.
Plot: The restraining barrier that Riotto left in the outside world was broken, mainly thanks to two people.
One was a banya, who used his rational ability to forcibly create six Moonlight Throne Cannons, which directly broke through the first layer of the barrier.
The others were responsible for supplying energy. Xier used Black Abyss and White Flower to save the duck, and then Theresa was responsible for C in the second stage.
OK, the barrier is lifted.
Many people here tried to refute my emphasis on the constraint barrier [which was so difficult to deal with in the previous era], and then used this to say [a lot of people would die if Otto didn't take away the barrier] to prove that I was overly critical of Otto, and some even called me sick.
Well, let's review what our dear bishop did before he did this, and whether the Ruler of Constraint is difficult to deal with in this era.
First of all, we need to confirm what Otto is going to use this barrier power for.
Is Emperor Otto finally showing compassion and starting to save people?
Quite the opposite actually.
According to Changguang, after she helped Otto develop a plan to "destroy all human beings in the world and go back to the past", Otto smiled and said that he had a plan with less sacrifices.
This is the plan we saw in the plot.
But in Otto's opinion, this plan has a [50% probability of being implemented], so what will happen if the other 50% probability of not being able to implement this plan with less sacrifices?
No one thinks that Otto would give up the opportunity to go back to the past and let go of other people who were to be sacrificed in the plan at that time, right?
I don’t know why some people would bring the casualties of previous civilizations into this era just to praise Otto. Don’t these people know that there are variables?
The previous civilization had no intelligence, no Moonlight Throne, no Judas, and no Ruler of Reason standing on the side of humanity. It was completely in the dark and could only resort to heaping up human lives.
In this era, after the predecessors of the previous civilization left behind intelligence, divine equipment, and Alysia opened up a new path, it is impossible to fight as miserably as in the previous civilization under normal circumstances.
Even according to Joyce's strength and his development after he survived, the second Herrscher Lao Yang plus Tesla and Einstein could barely win, the Thunder Law was not much stronger than the single-core Air Law and would probably be defeated, the Wind Law was not as good as the Thunder Law [the strength difference was 2000/3200], and the combination of Ice Law + Rock Law was also killed normally. It can be said that the number of people who originally needed to be sacrificed would not have to be sacrificed so much because Joyce survived.
Otto was responsible for all this.
And the most abstract part of this plot is that some people just picked out the plot that is favorable to Otto and started to blow it up.
But we know that a story is not a single fragment, a chapter is three-dimensional.
In Twilight of Fools, Rialto did the following.
After resigning, he started to make trouble → got the last dominant core → got the restraining power → used the restraining power to protect himself and started squatting → beat Bianca → squatted the false god → beat Kiana and Bianca.
In this process, the fact that Kiana and Bianca were able to win can only be attributed to the efforts of everyone. No one would think that Otto gave them some information and let them win, and that "all this is Otto's credit".
Then, those who praise Otto directly extracted a single event in the story [obtaining the power of restraint] without looking at the causes and consequences, or the bad consequences that Otto might have created [he didn't create them because someone stopped him].
If the protagonists are in trouble, seven billion people will be doomed because Otto has opened a turtle shell and turned into a false god.
Now some people are saying that Otto saved many people with the turtle shell...
This is really abstract.
By the way, if Joyce hadn’t died that year, he wouldn’t have needed to take such a serious action as the one that killed Banya.
In this era, normal play will give you a great start, and this is no joke.
